Monday 18 February 2013

Beneath the ruins of Adiranthe. Part 11 (by Paladin)


Editors Note - you should read the last parts of Chp 10 before the first part of this :) Paladin takes it in a cute direction, I thought. Go Eleria!

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The Sorceress wore an emerald chemise which gave her freedom of movement and outlined her figure. She’d removed all jewellery and had unbound her hair. The blond sauntered to the middle of the chamber and stood waiting with her hands on her hips.

Eleria stood opposite her and although she wanted to punish the sorceress for her humiliation in the feast-hall she didn’t want to take all her frustrations out on the woman. She also didn’t want to reveal to Kardan the extent to which she could now control the magic of the silk strips.

“A test of strength to begin?” the blond suggested. She raised both hands, palms outwards. Eleria shrugged and matched the gesture. Their fingers were quickly entwined. 

“A pity you’re feeling so weak,” the sorceress whispered. “In fact you already know your rightful place is on your knees.”

Eleria shook her head as if struggling against a compulsion to obey.

“Begin,” the Goblin King commanded.

The sorceress began squeezing and trying to use her slightly greater height to force Eleria’s hands back. Eleria gasped as she felt herself slowly being forced back and down. She tried to step back and circle around to give herself some room but the sorceress cut her off and with a wide grin applied even more pressure. Eleria collapsed to her knees with a sob as the blond woman towered over her. 

“Submit now and I’ll not hurt you too much,” the sorceress licked her lips as she looked down on Eleria. “Continue to struggle and I will punish you, then I will sit astride your face until you’re ready to beg to submit to me.” The sorceress moved close enough for Eleria to feel the woman’s thighs touching her face.

“There is a third choice,” Eleria growled. She gathered her strength and surged to her feet. In a single move she rose to her toes then drove the sorceress down to the floor. The woman wailed as her fingers were bent backwards.

Kardan’s laughter echoed around the chamber.

Eleria broke their fingerlock but before the sorceress had recovered she caught the blond’s wrist and stepped around and behind the kneeling woman. Eleria pushed the blond forward and sat enough of her weight on the sorceresses’ back to keep her there. She then twisted the wrist she’d captured until it was high up the other woman’s back.

The sorceress screamed in pain and tried to dig the nails of her free hand into Eleria’s leg. After a brief struggle Eleria trapped that wrist as well. She rocked her hips forward and rode the blond to the ground. 

As Kardan had once done to her she sat in the small of the sorceresses back and pulled the woman’s arms backwards, stretching her like a bow. Now it was the blond’s turn to sob in agony. 

Eleria continued to hold the sorceress in that position until she felt her opponent’s struggles grow weaker. She knew if she held her here the woman would submit, after all she had when Kardan had done it to her, but that wouldn’t be enough after all the woman’s taunts. Eleria released her opponents arms and the sorceress collapsed to the ground.

Eleria stood the reached down to take a handful of blond hair. She dragged the woman to her feet. The sorceress threw a weak punch which Eleria easily blocked. She then whipped her arm around locking the blond’s elbow. Eleria then straightened her own arm. The sorceress screamed and rose up onto her toes to try and relieve the pressure.

Eleria released the lock, stepped in close and spun, throwing the sorceress over her shoulder. The blond landed hard on her back the wind driven out of her. Eleria slowly walked around her opponent, making it clear to Kardan and the woman on the ground that she was fully in control.

The sorceress tried to slowly rise but Eleria placed her foot on the woman’s chest and pushed her back down to the ground. “Submit?” she asked.


The sorceress spat at her, “I don’t submit to gutter trash thieves.”

Eleria smiled and removed her foot, “so glad to hear it I didn’t really want this to end too quickly.”

Eleria again dragged the blond to her feet then waited. The sorceress grabbed Eleria around the waist trying to crush her to force the air out of her lungs or to smother her with her ample breasts. 

Eleria allowed the woman a moment of hope before allowing the woman to take her full weight on her arms. The Sorceress snarled, squeezing harder, thinking Eleria was weakening.

Eleria laughed and swung her legs around the woman’s body. She kicked hard behind both knees and the sorceress dropped to the ground. Eleria pushed hard off the floor and drove the blond backwards landing heavily on top.

Eleria quickly pinned the sorceress's wrists to the floor and straddled her chest. “Well?” she demanded.

Her opponent tried to look away but Eleria caught another handful of hair and pulled her head back around. “I quit the battle,” the sorceress answered.

Eleria looked to the Goblin King who shrugged gestured to indicate that he would leave it in her hands. Eleria looked back at the sorceress. It wasn’t enough she decided.
Eleria slid forward until her thighs framed the blond woman’s face. She repaid the earlier slap with one of her own! “This challenge is to a submission, you don’t get to quit it. You submit or to quote you will be made to beg to submit.”

The sorceress bucked but quickly gave up when she realised Eleria couldn’t be so easily unseated. “Lord Kardan she cried. “Surely you can’t mean for this guttersnipe to treat me like this?”

Kardan considered the scene before him for a long moment before answering. He loved the sight of the sorceresses body helplessly pinned beneath Eleria as much as he loved the dominant pose Eleria held with her silk clad behind firmly placed on the sorceresses chest and throat, her shins pressing down on the blond’s arms and her own hands resting on her hips. It was not an image he would quickly forget.

“As much as it pains me to do this my dear sorceress but you did in fact frame the conditions of this challenge yourself and my pretty pony, who appears very comfortable astride you by the way, has every right to demand your submission. I would suggest, that unless you have some some strength in reserve to allow you to escape, that you carefully consider your position under my pony and remember what you threatened her with could easily be visited upon you.”

The sorceress glared up at Eleria, “you wouldn’t dare.”


Eleria laughed and ran her fingers through her hair to show her complete control of the sorceress and her disdain for any resistance she might show. She bounced on the blond’s chest, enjoying each groan and grimace, using her thighs to ensure the sorceress was forced to look up at her.

Eleria paused, “once I would never have considered it. I would much rather have beaten your pretty face black and blue but right now I’m not above humiliating you with your own threat, in fact...,”

Eleria shifted forward and dropped her butt on to the sorceresses face, smothering the woman’s snarl of outrage. The blond’s struggles were short-lived and she went very still. It was an unusual feeling to be in such a commanding position on top of another woman. 

Eleria had no doubt that she would have been utterly humiliated if it had been done to her and knew that for someone so used to dominating others it would be an even more intense defeat. She moved back onto the woman’s chest. 

The sorceress looked up at her without a trace of her usual arrogance. “Well?” Eleria demanded.

“I submit,” 

Eleria gave her an amused look, then moved as if to sit astride her face again.

“Please,” the sorceress cried, “please I beg you to accept my submission.”

Eleria laughed and patted her beaten opponent’s cheek. She stood and ordered the sorceress onto all fours. Eleria stepped over the blond and without taking her eyes off Kardan she slowly lowered her weight onto the woman’s back. The sorceress made no protest even when Eleria caught up her hair and drummed her heels against her thighs.

Eleria rode her slowly towards the Goblin King’s throne and only reined her in once they were right in front of Kardan.

The Goblin King watched it all with an intensity that reminded Eleria that her objective of distraction was certainly being achieved. 

“Sorceress you have been fairly overcome in combat and have submitted, you are now bound to my service for one month. Do you accept this?”

“Yes Lord Kardan.”

“And to seal this,” Eleria added as she dismounted. She placed her foot on the sorceresses head and pushed it down until the woman’s lips met Kardan’s boot. 

The Goblin King smiled, “you are dismissed sorceress.” The kneeling woman vanished. “And now, what to do with you my victorious pony, hmm?”
Eleria collected the sorceresses emerald necklace and placed it around her own neck. She sauntered back up to the waiting King and placed her arms around his neck. Eleria gave him a light but soft kiss on the lips. She backed away from the throne.

“Now, now we fight for my freedom.” she said.