Here it is... If you prefer not to read a story where the man ends up on the bottom, don't read this!
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Pony’s Revenge Part One - By Paladin
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Sasha was flicking through radio stations while driving. Apparently she found one playing something she liked and began singing along. Not recognizing the song or even seeing any resemblance to actual music I smiled. Sure in the knowledge that there were already teenagers out there who would think her choice of music was lame.
I settled back in the seat. It wasn’t like I knew where we were going so I couldn’t even offer her valuable driving instructions. I had to admit that this was an unusual situation.
Throughout our friendship it had been me driving Sasha to a destination, often without giving her any more information than the knowledge she was going to be ridden across some new terrain.
Today things had changed. Oh yes we’d always joked that one day she’d get her revenge, especially for the time I’d spurred her across a mud flat.
The thought of Sasha’s toned body forced through the dragging silt and mud until she was exhausted excited me all over again. I keenly remembered her cry of submission as I drove her across the estuary, the feel of her stomach as she bucked under me, giving the last of her energy. Then, the sight of her breasts as she wriggled out of her mud soaked crop top. Caught up in the memory I could almost feel the firm curves beneath me.
“You’re awfully quiet,” Sasha commented. “What are you thinking about?”
“I was thinking that you’re getting a lot better at wrestling.”
Sasha gave me a wicked smile, “damn right I am.”
In fact she was. Previously I could have easily let her get two or three pins ahead and still overtaken her to win. Not today though.
Wrestling had started much as usual with Sasha showing up in an outfit designed to distract me as much as possible. The first pin had ended with me straddling Sasha’s stomach and pinning her wrists high above her head. I grinned down at her as I counted to ten. She hadn’t struggled or even bucked.
During the second pin I had put her to the carpet with a quick hip throw. Sasha tried to roll away but I’d pulled her back towards me. Strangely she subsided without a struggle as I’d swung my leg over and sat down just below her ribs. With an arrogant smile I hadn’t ever taken her wrists, placing my hands on my hips and counting slowly.
“Oh this is going to be the easiest won pony ride ever,” I’d laughed.
I was still laughing when her legs swept around my waist, crossed over my chest and flung me backwards. I’m fairly certain I’d stopped laughing once her backside was firmly settled on my chest and her shins were pressing down across my arms.
One all.
Sasha went into overdrive on the third pin and seemed to be in three places at once. I tried to buck her off but she wrapped her legs around my waist and squeezed with all her might. I gave in very quickly but two pins were nothing.
Two one to Sasha.
On the fourth pin I caught her up in a bear hug, always a pleasant experience, and rolled her to the ground. Using my body weight to pin Sasha to the carpet I fought to capture her wrists. Sasha wrapped her arms around the back of my neck and pulled my head down into her cleavage, an even more pleasant experience. With my greater weight holding her down I knew I could break her grip and gain the pin. I felt her legs tighten around my right thigh, again no problem she’d tried this before and had only managed to slow me down.
Just as I was about to break free of her smother-hug I felt her heels press against my calf muscle. Sasha tightened her grip and her heels dug in. An electric wire ripped up from my leg into my back. I arched and twisted without thinking and Sasha used my own momentum to roll me onto my back.
She fairly leapt forward into a very high straddle. My right leg was numb and trying to buck with the left was not only difficult but showed no promise of moving that little wench off my chest.
I realized I was wasting energy and tried to grab her hands, wrists arms or anything that I could use to pull her off. Sasha was ready for that, more than ready in fact. She slid a little further forward until my chin was pressed up against the crotch of her jean shorts and her lovely toned thighs were framing my face. Then she squeezed. Those lovely toned legs clamped against the sides of my head and seemed intent on pushing my ears together. As you could imagine I forgot all about grabbing anything.
Sasha took hold of my wrists and pushed them down against her legs. She loosened her grip ever so slightly and counted to ten. If I even looked like resisting I knew those powerful legs would start squeezing again. She finished her count with a loud whoop and punched her fists in the air.
I knew Sasha had been getting better at wrestling but I hadn’t expected this. I had been prepared for a fun wrestle that would end as always with Sasha submitting and then giving me pony rides. Sasha had come to win.
Even this pin showed her change in attitude. She’d never sat so high up on my chest and throat. Looking straight up at her was intimidating to say the least.
“What’s the score?” she demanded.
“Three, one to you,” I replied. I didn’t even follow it up with a cheeky comment.
Sasha put her hands on her hips and looked down at me with an evil grin. “Submit and save yourself another beating,” she told me.
“Yeah right,” I started to say but her thighs choked the words off.
“Submit,’ she ordered again.
It was amazing Sasha seemed to tower over me. Her eyes and her smile said she knew she’d beaten me fair and square. My leg was still numb and her position above me seemed so dominating, what could it hurt to let her have this one I told myself. Her pleasure is in being the pony she’ll probably just ride me around the room, get tired of it and demand that I ride her anyway.
“I submit,” I said.
“What?” Sasha’s eyes widened.
“I submit,” I repeated. I wanted to look away but her thighs kept me looking up at her.
She let out a wild yell and unfastened her ponytail. Her back arched as she ran her fingers through her hair. “No wonder you get so excited,” she said. “If beating me feels half this good it’s a wonder you can stand it.”
She laughed and bounced on my chest, “I’m tingling all over and I feel so strong and powerful.”
She looked down at me, “say, I just got beaten by a girl.”
I closed my eyes and did as she said.
“No,” she growled. “Look at me and say I just got beaten by an Aussie girl!”
I did. I didn’t have much choice after all.
“Now what else do you usually make me say? Hmm. I know say, Sasha is the best wrestler and I am her SLAVE.”
She was certainly enjoying this victory a lot more than I thought she would be.
Sasha slid back onto my stomach and rested back against my legs. “All I need now is a cushion and some popcorn,” she laughed. Sasha arched one foot over my face, “kiss it slave.”
I gave it a little peck and she tapped my face with her foot. “Kiss it properly slave, like you make me do it.”
I kissed the pad of her foot softly and she squealed with laughter, “that tickles. Now the other foot.” She squealed again.
“Maybe I should make you lick and suck my toes, slave?”
“That would be mean,” I replied.
Sasha sat up and dropped herself back onto my chest. “Mean,” she repeated. “You made me kiss your spurs, you rode me through mud, twice and you rode me over sand dunes. Today I’ll decide what’s mean, boy. Also you made me call you master and by the end of today you will call me Mistress. Oh yes you will.”
Sasha stood up.
I turned over and got onto all fours.
Sasha laughed, “oh it’s not going to be that easy horsey. I’m not just going to ride you around here, I’ve got somewhere much better in mind.” She picked up the backpack she’d dropped when she’d arrived and grinned, “let’s get going slave.”
Very nice work, Paladin. Very excited to see the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteThanks but it gets better or worse depending on whether it's Susan's point of view or mine you're listening to LOL.
ReplyDeleteI think exposure to more points of view and the wider world of this fetish has peaked our Susan's interest so that she's curious about how it would feel from the other side of the coin, so to speak. Clearly she's in need of some firm reining in lol
Hee hee hee - I may have been partially responsible for putting some strange ideas in her head, I apologize.
ReplyDeleteIt's a great exercise as a writer, though - to see if you can write something that is contrary to your own personal preferences, and keep the same level of energy and passion in the piece.
So far, you're doing admirably ;-)
I like the "losing a bet" scenario, nice way to establish the (temporary) dominance of the smaller, weaker girl over the man.
Mm hmm. This is what happens when I get tired of a lack of other similar girls to myself (Other than Kanashii, of course) and go find ponyboys to talk to instead. :)
ReplyDeleteI agree for someone who (as far as I know??) hasn't felt it and doesn't like it "that way" Paladin has done brilliantly. I am not totally sure how I feel about switching on a guy, I'd have to try it! But I like this story.
Yes first you start with what you'd like to do but then you have to consider what the gender differences might be in both physical and emotional terms. This involves some guesswork which is why I send it to Susan first so that she can correct any glaring mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad it's enjoyable so far but I can say with absolute honesty that I haven't been in this situation myself so I couldn't say for sure if I'd like it or not. Obviously my preference is to be the rider :)
Should we all be concerned by Susan's "I'd have to try it" statement lol.
Concerned? Not me ;-) I think healthy curiosity and exploration should be encouraged. I've heard it said many times that the best dominants are ones who have spent at least some time in the submissive role, I suppose the same theory could be applied to ponies!
ReplyDeleteTony, you may be right, but my point of view is only one: women use to have a natural saddle, that curve on their back with large hips , so, the normal for me is: girl on all fours, me on her, LOL :-)
ReplyDeleteLOL!! Of course you'd say that Tony. You love to take the pony role as well.
ReplyDeleteI did sit on a guys back very briefly once, he was broad and muscular and did NOT have anything like a "natural saddle" in his back like girls do. He was a LOT stronger than me and it showed. The dynamic of a girl riding a big guy like that would probably be totally different.
I remember you said on MR that you felt he carried you rather than you having the chance to ride him. Which is why I included that part in the story and thought the extra equipment would compensate for the size and strength difference.
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